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By force of arms, the Aztecs defeated and conquered the peoples who had once oppressed them. Despite the great size their empire finally assumed, they never abondoned the site on the lake. Their once crude village became a huge, magnificent city and the rafts, invented in a gamble to stave off poverty, proliferated to keep pace with the demands of the capital city of Central Mexico.

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[Wed Jun 9 16:21:39 PDT 2004-160] Gwen Ives (NOSPAMgwen@galtsgulch.us.NOSPAM):
I know you said you don't want spelling and grammar errors pointed out, but... perverty?? :-)

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